What  is most valuable to you? How do you put a value on something?This might  sound funny to you ,but the thing that most valuable to me is  sleeping.My Ipod is something that is not valuable to  me.I could  sell   it vary essay  to any one  so this are about my priced and Pericles  items to me.I think that you can put a price on something by  if you  like it and if you payed money for it.
Sleeping  is most valuable to me.It is priceless to me because it`s the best part  of my day.I get to recharge my “batteries”.One reason I have to  recharge my batteries is because I have to go to school for six  hours.Then I have parasites for football which lasts another four  hours.Evan after I do those two things, I still have to go home and do  chores. One  chore that I do that takes all my  time is  cutting the  grass after that I need a lot of sleep.
Sleeping  is my favorite  thing  throughout the day.After sleeping I wake up  happy and energized.If I don`t sleep,I wake up moody and mope around.The  worst thing about not getting a lot of sleep is that I get   headaches.Some times these headaches are so bad that I to take Advil 
My  ipod is something  that I could put a price on.Its a tool that helps me  to workout.It may help me tho concentrate but in not valuable so I can  get rid of it easy.If I had to I would cell it for about  50 dollars.
A  solution for  me not having my Ipod  any more  would be to listen to  the radio.I would listen to the radio because I have them all over my  house and my dad always plays it really loud.I think it would also save  my money  so I would not have to buy  any more songs on itunes.
This  is why I can put a value on my ipod and , why I can not put a value on  my sleep.I think  these are to good things to have but  my ipod  is not  necessary to function as a person where  sleep is very important  to  function.So  you need  your sleep and you do not have to  have an ipod.I  think its good for you to  sleep!
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1:) The conflict of the story was, he gets caught at a party and he was being accused for drinking. The conflict was external. The conflict was resolved by being suspended for nine games of lacrosse.what made the story more dramatic was he was suspended for 9 out of 10 games for his lacrosse season.
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3:) My favorite part of the story was after he was suspended he practices and he goes back to lacrosse and he gets to play the playoffs and ends up winning the championship.
4:) the best part of the story i thought was when he ends up playing in the playoffs and winning the championship for his team.
5:) the story's theme is make good choices.
6:) if you were to revise something i would just tell you to make sure your paragraphs a very thoroughly detailed